INTERPRETATION ON "I BRAIN ODTU"
The new slogan about METU is quite effective I think. The words of the slogan are really encouraging and chosen very carefully. Ideas that it has also really encouraging. By investigating and reasoning rather than satisfying with the existing knowledge, METU members show their potential.They create new ideas and share them and implement. Thinking critically of every extent of life makes difference pretty well so I believe METU carries out all of the mentioned ideas. Furthermore, the visualization of the video is sharpened with mostly red colour. It takes attention of audience so it is effective as well. However, single speaking both effective and ineffective while considered people’s preference to variety. I mean for some people this is the best while for some it is not. I hope that if the speech was spoken in a group or showing short videos from University’s campus or places such as laboratories or conference room could be more effective. From another point, I liked the phrases being used. Hence, I liked the slogan.
Dear Gülalek,
YanıtlaSilI think you are good at explaining your ideas by using the right connectors. I liked your design of this entry. It is nice to see the photo above. Thank you! However, you should pay attention to some points while writing. I wrote some mistakes and how to correct them in parenthesis below.
INTERPRATATION(spelling mistake-“interpretation” is the correct one) ON "I BRAIN ODTU"
The new slogan about METU is quite effective I think. The words of the slogan are really encouraging and chosen very carefully. Ideas it have also really encouraging(You should write “Ideas that it has are also really encouraging). By investigating and reasoning rather satisfying with the existing knowledge, creating new knowledge and sharing it, even practicing are really significant points in our planet. Thinking critically of every extent of life makes difference pretty well so I believe METU applies all of the mentioned ideas. Furthermore, the visualization of the video is sharpened with mostly red color(spelling mistake-“colour” is the correct one). It takes attention from(of) audience(You should put a comma before “so”) so it is effective as well. But,(fragment-combine these two sentences) single speaking both effective and ineffective while considered people’s preference to variety. I hope that if some time the speech was spoken in group or showing short videos from university’s campus or places such as laboratories or conference room could be more effective. From another point I would like the phrases be used( You should write “From another point, I liked the phrases being used/which were used.). Hence, I liked the slogan…(There is no need to use triple dots here because your sentence is complete in itself.)